Author: Harry

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And now there came mist and snow-  Old English

And it grew wondrous cold-  old English

And ice, mast high came floating by-  rhyme

As green as emerald- simile

 

And through the cliffs, the snowy drifts- rhyme

Did send a dismal sheen- Old English, aliteration

Nor shapes of men nor beasts we ken- rhyme

The ice was all between- old english

story with 15 new words

there once was a loon, he was crazy and his kin tried helping him resolve his silliness. They took him to a kirk, but they could not help him. His dad was so swound he could not sleep. So they bought him a ticket for a boat, he was off for the day. When they went to pick him up the helmsman, “we’ve found him a new hobby” quoth he. So they got him a job on this boat. But the Police ceased this boat and said he was to young to work on this boat. So an albatross came down from the sky and steered the boat all the way back to the boy. He hailed this bird in true gratitude. This bird is wondrous. He stroked this bird it was so sheen. The albatross died. They got fathom and wrote it down in the memory book. The bird was so shroud. Thus the boy, he was so upset. The dad pursued to take the birds role to bond with his son. They met a hermit. he said “may the lord be with you.” They were southward. to sail across the Atlantic. The boy (Harry) was dismal.

20 unusual definitions





loon- a silly or foolish person

eftsoons- soon after or once again

kin- ones family and relations

quoth- used only in first and third person another word for said

kirk- a church

sheen- a bright smooth surface

swound- act of fainting

shroud- a thing that obscures

fathom- units of measuring the dead

minstrelsy- the art or practice of  minstrel

thus- in such or the following manner

cease- to stop something

pursued- to follow in order to overtake

hermit- a person who lives for religious reasons

southward- moving or faced situated to the south

dismal- causing gloom or dejection; gloomy; dreary; cheerless; melancholy

wondrous- wonderful

albatross- wild bird (rare)

hailed- to cheer salute or greet someone

helmsman-  a person who steers a ship





Part the seventh

In part the seventh the ancient mariner was found by human beings and the ancient mariner was frozen he did not move one bit was this the end of him?is he dead?No he suddenly woke up the some men found him and they pulled him into there boat and took him away he told the wedding guest and as his soul had been all alone in the wide wide sea and together they talked and together they prayed to each father bends,old men,and loving friends,and youth and maidens gay. Farewell he told the wedding guest and they were gone. He turned to the bridegrooms door and thought like someone had been stunned and is sense of forlorn a sadder and a wiser man he rose the. Morrow morn.so from part the seventh I think that this adventure happened to the ancient mariner but he was telling it to a wedding guest.

part the sixth

In part the sixth the ancient mariner had just woke up the ship that he was on it moved slowly in the distance, but as the ship moved a lighthouse caught the ancient mariners sight is this it?is this  the ancient mariners own country! this is his dream of joy but the ancient mariner didn’t know if he was really awake or not so he prayed to god. with his tears o “let me be awake or let me sleep away”.A harbour-bay was nearby and was clear as glass. Above, the moonlight shone and as it shone it steeped in silentness,it crept away.so at the end his gods cleans his sins and wipes the albatross blood from around his neck.

part the fith summary

.The ancient mariner is cold and dry  and he started to move except he could not feel his limbs.?

.A gush of wind came towards the ancient mariner, he could not feel nothing but the sails started to flap.

. The dead crew started to steer the boat even though the was dead.

.The ancient mariner could hear musical instruments playing in his head.

The spirit that cursed the mariner loved the bird who was shot by a crossbow.???

story

I think that the person pushing the ship will crash into something. Then it will start to rain and the will start to sink,then drown except the ancient mariner.Then he will get stranded on an island, but he will come across the wedding guest. Who is believed to be death. But she will hide in someones body. And they will be locked inside that body and she is never seen until an albatross comes and frees her. Continue reading

part the four

Death comes on a ship and kills the ancients mariners crew. But they turn into zombies. Except the ancient mariner. death gets scared and looks into the water of sea snakes. and with that she named the albatross a cross, a sin. And with that it fell of into the sea.

Part 3 summary

A ghost ship is spotted by the ancient mariner and his crew. Then the ancient mariner drinks his blood to say “a sail, a sail!” A women and death were gambling. The women won the gamble and she could take control of the ship. She took the crews souls. Apart from the ancient mariner! At this time now she is scared of one of thee and thy skinny hand. She trembled with fear, who is this strange one. Who could be he.